Read my Common App short answer?

College Essays
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<p>Hi!
I was wondering if anyone out there could give me feedback on my common app short answer question about extracurriculars if i pm'd it to them.</p>

<p>THANKS SO MUCH!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it</p>

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<p>sure, pm me if you still need some help</p>