read my common essay?

<p>I'm so unsure about my essay for the common app. and know i have a lot of work to do on it, but i've just found myself in a rut and its been hard for me to change anything, though I know it sucks. I'm also unsure about the length. Should I add more? I would really aprreciate it if a few people looked it over, but only people already accepted to college.</p>

<p>I'll read it. PM me</p>

<p>If you still need or want another opinion, just PM me.</p>

<p>I am 2008, but if you're okay with that and still need outside opinion, send it over.</p>

<p>anyone else want to read it and give me some feedback? some of my main concern about it is whether i could really use it for the common app. or not since it comes from one of uchicago's essay topics, so any input is well needed!</p>

<p>PM me. ......</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>