Read my CommonApp essay? :D

<p>If you could help me edit my essay for the commonapp that would be fantastic. The topic is "evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you."
Just shoot me an email or i'll pm you!
Thank you in advance!</p>

<p>I can read it! (:</p>

<p>thank you so much!
sending you my essay via pm. :3</p>