Read my commonapp essay please?! Dec. 1 deadline

<p>Please critique my commonapp essay on diversity. Post in this thread so I can email or PM it :)
No 2014ers please. Thank you very much! :)</p>

<p>Anyone? Please?</p>

<p>Any takers at all?? The essay is due in less than two days I really need some proof readers please!</p>

<p>I’ll read it! all of my apps are in. Pm it to me.</p>

<p>I’ll read it. I’m done with my essays.</p>