Read my commonapp essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Would anyone be willing to read my commonapp essay and give me CONSTRUCTIVE criticism?</p>

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<p>PM me, mate. :)</p>

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<p>No problem! Just send it over to me.</p>

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<p>Sure thing! ill be happy to! just PM me (: GOOD LUCK!</p>

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<p>Send it over :)</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me :)</p>

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<p>i can help you out :)</p>