Read my commonapp essay?

[injectmagic]

<p>Can anyone read my commonapp essay and give me CONSTRUCTIVE criticism?</p>

[Murphy600]

<p>I am happy to give input.</p>

[awesomeirl]

<p>Sure, where are you planning to apply to?</p>

[jxieeducation]

<p>sure PM</p>

[alpaldef]

<p>I’ll read it</p>

[wstlfb8]

<p>would you guys mind reading mine as well? Id love to read yours as well. Thanks PM me with them</p>

[Peppino]

<p>I’ll give yours a read. Would you like to read mine as well?</p>