Read my Cornell supplement essay?

<p>Since it appears that most of the essay readers in the "College Essays" section are rather suspicious or inactive...</p>

<p>I'd appreciate if somebody could read my supplement essay: "Why Cornell / Why Engineering"</p>

<p>Cornell alumni or parents of Cornell students would be amazing, but I'll take any reader who seems legitimate and willing to give feedback.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>