read my diversity common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>I just finished a second draft recently; I'm giving it to two english teachers this week to read (current teacher and my teacher from last year, who is also writing one of my recommendations)... I'm an Asian female from an area that sort of lacks racial diversity. I'm kind of worried that the topic might be a little overused, but if anyone here could read it and give me some feedback that would be great.</p>

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<p>bump10char</p>

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<p>anyone…?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it for you :)</p>

<p>Just PM me whenever.</p>

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<p>PM me, i’ll be glad to read it :)</p>

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<p>U can pm me too</p>

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<p>PM please :)</p>

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<p>bump10char
anyone else interested in reading it? i think i’ve got a slightly different and possibly final draft done.</p>

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<p>bump10char</p>

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<p>you wanna trade?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it… is it part of the supplements on commonapp?
pm me if you will. thanks.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it PM me.</p>

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<p>I will critique it for you. :)</p>

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<p>Yeah, sure why not. Just pm me.</p>