Read my EC essay, please?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Would anyone be willing to read my extra-curricular essay? It's a little rough and any feedback/assistance would be greatly appreciated. :)</p>

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<p>Pretty please? :)</p>

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<p>i will, send it my way</p>

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<p>PM it over :)</p>

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<p>i will. send it.</p>