<p>Could someone read my essay for my National Merit application and give me some good feedback on what I need to do better, what I've done well, etc? PM me with your email and I can email it to you. I will gladly read your essay and give feedback as well!</p>
<p>the essay is on basketball and how it has influenced my life in case anyone is wondering</p>
<p>hey i can read it.</p>