<p>So I just finished my first very, very rough draft of my common app essay. I'm not looking for editing just yet (I actually wrote it on my phone so...), but I am wondering what you guys think of the topic, writing style etc. I'm specifically worried about coming off as having too much self-pity and not addressing effects thoroughly enough. Its answering the common app question about becoming an adult and currently clocks in at 613 words. Does anyone want to read it?</p>
<p>Bump</p>
<p>Sent from my DROID RAZR using cc</p>
<p>I’ll read:)</p>
<p>I’ll read it! PM me!</p>
<p>I’d be happy to look over it! Just PM it to me with whatever specific things I should critique for. :)</p>