READ MY ESSAY FOR NORTHWESTERN?? :) please?

<p>I'm looking for some constructive criticism. BASH me and TELL me what the heck I'm doing wrong!! </p>

<p>Writing is not my strong point... I got a 35 on my ACT, have perfect 4.0, and everything else needed... but I'm super worried about this essay :(</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>bump please?</p>

<p>I’m applying to northwestern too. Is this the common app or supplement?</p>

<p>it’s the common app one… it’s 600 words… are you applying ED?</p>

<p>No, RD but I finished my essay early. I’m in the same boat, I have a 34 and a 2290, but I’m not sure if my essay is unique enough</p>

<p>read eachothers??</p>

<p>Sure…pm me with yours and I’ll get mine to you later tonight.</p>

<p>Will anyone else read it??</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it!</p>

<p>anyone else? I haven’t had any criticism yet :(</p>

<p>If you want any constructive criticism, PM me.</p>

<p>I’ll critique it for you :)</p>

<p>Would be happy to review and provide feedback…</p>

<p>send her over</p>