Read my essay for UC schools!

College Essays
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<p>Hello everyone! I wrote my personal statement for the prompt "Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations."</p>

<p>It would be awesome if I could get some feedback on it</p>

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<p>So, where is your essay? o.o</p>

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<p>I can PM it to you! I don’t want to post it publicly online</p>

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<p>I’d love to read and provide my comments.</p>

<p>Though I am not an expert so its your wish if you want to send it or not!</p>