read my essay? help would be greatly appreciated!

Colleges and Universities A-Z Stanford University
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<p>This is the essay i hope to send as my stanford long essay. I am really unsure about the conclusion right now, as i want to show not tell, but I also need to explain the "so what..." as in this happened but how has it affected me and what does it mean?</p>

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<p>hit me :) (10 characters)</p>

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<p>sure...haven't done one of these in a while ^^</p>

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<p>I'll read.</p>

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<p>id love to help, just pm me</p>

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<p>PM me for sure as well.</p>

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<p>Sure. (10characters)</p>

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<p>ill give you my best thoughts...just pm...</p>

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<p>you can pm me if you'd like =) I've done this for quite a few people so far!</p>

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<p>I'll read it too!</p>

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<p>i'll do what i can to help. pm me</p>

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<p>hmm..just pm me.</p>

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<p>PM me if you wish to :D</p>

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<p>wow thanks to everyone who has been helping me out. I took your advice and my english teacher, ( whom i trust as he spent the summer grading for the college board ap lit) thought it was great! Its so nice to have peer input that is both thoughtful and intelligent. Where I come from I'm not used to that, hence why I'd like to go to stanford....anyways thanks everybody!</p>