<p>Hey, I'd love someone to read and give opinions on my common app essay. I'll read yours and edit too. And if you do read mine, feel free to give me your real opinion and rip it up! Thanks so much!</p>
<p>PM ME your essay, I'll try to rip it up. I can send you mine also</p>
<p>i'll give you strong critique; if you want</p>
<p>PM me and ill critique it. I already got accepted last year (08er) so i dont need my essay to be critique'd</p>