Read my essay? I'm applying to Harvard, Princeton, and Yale

College Essays
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<p>I want some feedback from people I don't know. Let me know if you want to read and give me some critique. Thanks!</p>

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<p>Rather than one of us read it, perhaps you should read this post first?</p>

<p><a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-admissions/1466-posting-essays-other-sensitive-information.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-admissions/1466-posting-essays-other-sensitive-information.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>As an aside, I often point writers to this article
<a href=“http://www.virginia.edu/undergradadmission/writingtheessay.html[/url]”>http://www.virginia.edu/undergradadmission/writingtheessay.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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<p>If you want, you can PM me and I’ll read it and send back comments :]</p>

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<p>PM me if you want comments.</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it. I’m a '11er, so no worries about me ripping off your essay.</p>

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<p>It’s very unwise to send your essay to complete strangers to read. People have posted on CC about having their essays stolen even by their real life friends.</p>

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<p>hey
pm me and i’ll have a look.</p>

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<p>PM Me. I’m a '14 but not applying to HY or P. Check my post history if you want.</p>

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<p>I’ll have a go! Pm it over. Thanks</p>

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<p>Id love to read it please PM it :)</p>

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<p>I’d love to help and give back suggestions/critiques =)</p>

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<p>Looks like you have had a few offers already, but if you need more to critique it, PM it to me. I probably won’t get to it until tonight.</p>

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<p>I’m honest. I can help if you want to PM it over.</p>

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<p>Pm me if you want. I am not applying to Harvard :]</p>

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<p>If you want me to read your essay, send me an email ( <a href="mailto:khk0036@hanmail.net">khk0036@hanmail.net</a> )</p>