Read My Essay! It Might Suck!

<p>Post your reply here if you would like to read it. Thanks!</p>

<p>email me at <a href="mailto:soccer15rules@yahoo.com">soccer15rules@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>I can help...</p>

<p>i like reading essays, lol.</p>

<p><a href="mailto:tim_dty@yahoo.com">tim_dty@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>i'll read it.</p>

<p>I read it. I think the essay flows really well. you seem to have a sound understanding of grammar, punctuation and vocab for the most part. I also thought it was interesting how the word "snip" kept re-appearing in the essay, almost like a motif, although i don't know if they have motifs in essays. I got the symbolism about the haircut, that you like change and new things and also it alluded to your dedication theater. at times though, im not sure if it was just me who felt it, but it seemed a little shallow, although that is hard to avoid when writing essentially about hair, lol. I dont think there's much you need to do to improve it, just go through it and make you sure you worded everything exactly the way you think is most efficient, and you'll be all set.</p>

<p>I wouldn't mind reading it.</p>

<p>ill read it...</p>

<p>Sure, keep em firing :)</p>

<p>i'll read your essay.</p>

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<p>I wouldn't mind reading it. PM me.</p>

<p>PM it to me if you want.</p>

<p>I would not mind reading it, either! PM me.</p>

<p><a href="mailto:sampanning@yahoo.com">sampanning@yahoo.com</a> I'd love to read it!</p>

<p>yupz, would like to read it too :)</p>

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<p>I would love to read ur essay =]</p>

<p>Any other takers?</p>