Read my essay please (any help appreciated)

College Essays
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<p>Topic: Explain how a high school or college course has influenced your life. Describe how this course influenced your decision in selecting your college major and how it may affect your career path. </p>

<p>Be as harsh/mean as you want because any and ALL help is better than none at all. </p>

<p>Thanks. I'll pm or e-mail it to you guys</p>

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<p>I'd like to read it and critique you.</p>

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<p>I'll give some helpful advice. PM me if you'd like me to read it.</p>

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<p>advice is always nice so i'll give you some. PM me.</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me. =) I'll be honest.</p>

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<p>I'll do my best...pm me</p>

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<p>I'll read your essay! PM me.</p>

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<p>i'll read it. PM me please.</p>

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<p>pm me, and i'll read it!</p>

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<p>If you still need help I will be more than willing to critique it for you.</p>

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<p>pm me if ud like</p>

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<p>Pm me too as well :)</p>

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<p>I'll read it!</p>

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<p>i'll read it!! and i'll try to be critical too XD</p>

<p>pm me =)</p>

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<p>here! me too :)</p>

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<p>I'll read it :D pm me</p>

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<p>I'll read it! You can pm me.</p>

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<p>i'll read it..thanks</p>