<p>Hi Everyone,</p>
<p>okay..i know its really really late but please be kind and read my essay for me. That would be really appreciated!! of course be rough on my essay as much as you can...trust me you are doing a big favor for me by spitting on my essay because i need to know all the mistakes to be fixed before turning them into the UCs admissions to see. please...please...help me somebody quick!!</p>