read my essay please? Guy from borneo

<p>to anyone who's willing to take some time off to help me out. :)</p>

<p>I am an applicant from Borneo. I just finished writing my essay and im not very sure where I stand with that essay. Anyone willing to take a look? and probably suggest to me if my essay is well enough for the schools im applying to.</p>

<p>btw, here is my stats. <a href="http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/middlebury-college/811363-chance-guy-borneo-international.html%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/middlebury-college/811363-chance-guy-borneo-international.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

<p>my school list (not final):
middlebury
princeton
vassar
hamilton
macalester
lafayette
oberlin
franklin & marshall</p>

<p>i’ll read it just PM it to me (:</p>