Read my essay please? (:

<p>I'm an international student applying for Fall 2012. Right now, I have two essays right and I don't know which to choose i'm still pretty ambivalent about them. The topic i chose was the significant experience one. Im hoping you guys can help me pick the more suitable one or point out any flaws in the essay so that i can perfect it. Leave a comment here and I'll PM you. THANKS! <3</p>

<p>I’ll read them! (:</p>

<p>I can help, PM them over :)</p>