<p>hey guys, anyone who's willing to read + critique my commonapp essay, please post here and ill pm you. only people who are enrolled in a college and older. thankss!!</p>
<p>I’ll take a read.</p>
<p>I’ll take a read, PM it to me.</p>
<p>sure I’ll also take a read! pm me</p>
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<p>Usually I don’t partake in this, but seeing that you’re an aspiring Princetonian, I’d be happy to help out!</p>
<p>i’ll read it! pm it to me</p>
<p>I know it’s a bit late but I will definitely want to read it. :)</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it.</p>
<p>PM me, I’ve got a pretty good eye for grammar.</p>
<p>Sure, I’d love to! PM me.</p>
<p>ill read it</p>
<p>Topic:Can the daily actions of average people have a significant impact on the course of history?
Placing a mark in the course of history is a process not easy to accomplish. Instead it requires idiosyncratic probity that accentuate the differences among those who really play an impact by their contribution, and those who just follow a routine of actions that in basic serve no major purpose. Considering such division, I support the statement that daily actions of average people don’t serve a substantial contribution in the course of history, basically because such people lack the essence qualities of what producing a changes requires.
The first example I would like to highlight is related to one of the most prominent and iconic protagonist in the USA history of equal rights assurance. Martin Luther King Jr. took the firm decision of openly counteracting the oppressive and discriminating policies towards African-American community .As an outcome, he become not only the leader of the civil right movement, but also the voice of the aspirations of random, average people who were not courageous enough to bring down the dogmatic racial beliefs of the time.Martin Luther King became famous for using non-violent resistance to overcome injustice and struggled to invalidate the application of the segregation laws. Its enough to mention the 1963 “March on Washington” where he delivered his famous speech of great oratory “I have a dream”. A speech in which he encompassed the theme of a just society where people would not be considered on terms of skin color but in terms of character content and contribution to the nation.Would the civil rights movement have acknowledged such popularity and acceptance if it were to be based on the actions of average people? Surely not, because it was Martin”s courage,resolution and tactful approach which made a difference.
Another example I would like to bring up adheres to the field of history and in particular to the American revolution. One of the most noted protagonist in the struggle of the 13 british-colonies to gain independence is definitely Deborah Samson. Deborah Samson is acknowledged for her courage and patriotism in willingly participating in the revolutionary war disguised as woman.In difference from many others,she offered her military contribution for the years in row and remained steadfast in her claims for fighting the enemies even after being wounded twice. As an outcome, she became the stereotype of her era, an example to follow for each woman.
Considering the above stated examples I strongly conclude that history is made of icons who dare to risk, who dare to innovate and bring something new. Only such people are catalyst that change the course of history and have the potential to leave a non-easily eradicated mark behind.
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<p>Can someone read mine as well please? :)</p>