Read my essay please?

College Essays
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<p>This is my first college essay and I want to know if I'm going in the right direction.</p>

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<p>I can read it. I responded to your other thread, though…is this the same essay?</p>

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<p>It’s a different one! Sorry this is my first day on here, do I email you?</p>

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<p>sure pm me</p>

5

<p>I’ll read it. PM it to me.</p>

6

<p>Sure I can read it!:)</p>

7

<p>I can read it too :).</p>

8

<p>Me too! PM me:D</p>

9

<p>i’ll read it!</p>

10

<p>I can read it :D</p>

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<p>I can help too!</p>

12

<p>I can read!</p>

13

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>sure ill read it!</p>

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<p>sure…PM me…</p>

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<p>I’d love to. PM me…</p>

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<p>Pm me I’ll read it</p>