Read my essay please?

It’s for Questbridge’s College Prep Scholar program. I don’t know if it’s at all in the right direction. Here’s the prompt:

This biographical essay helps us become acquainted with you in ways different from courses, grades, test scores, and other objective data. It demonstrates your ability to organize thoughts and express yourself. We are looking for an essay that will help us know you better as a person and as a student.
We are interested in learning more about you and the context in which you have grown up, formed your aspirations, and accomplished your academic successes. Please describe the factors and challenges that have most influenced you. How are they shaping your future aspirations?

Also, I need to cut it down by about 100 words… Any advice on how to do that?

Please, please comment below if you’re interested & I’ll PM it to you. :wink:

I’m interested.

Hello! I would be happy to help.

I’d love to help you out as well!

@espanyolo Sorry… I should have commented that the essay is finished now. Thanks for your willingness, though! I’m definitely available to help you out if you ever need it!