<p>I'm not too happy with it right now so I would like some constructive criticism. PM me if you're willing to help, I don't feel comfortable posting it on a public board. Thanks!</p>
<p>PM me, I'm going to college this fall, so I won't steal it.</p>
<p>Can I read it?</p>
<p>PM me...i'll give u some good feed backs</p>
<p>same, I'd be glad to check it out for you, pm me as well if you want.</p>
<p>Thanks for the replies. Anymore takers? I need all the help I can get! I'm especially stuggling with the ending of me essay, so any help is appreciated...</p>
<p>I'll read it. I'm also going to college next year.</p>
<p>I'll read it</p>
<p>Ill read it to if you would like.</p>
<p>PM me and I'll critique if you still need someone.</p>
<p>I'll take a look too if you still need it</p>
<p>i'd be happy to take a look</p>
<p>I can take a look.
=)</p>
<p>you could pm it to me.</p>
<p>PM me as well</p>