<p>i dont really know which way to go..but i tried..does anyone want to critique mines?</p>
<p>got one person to read it…anymore takers?</p>
<p>I’d be happy to help! just pm me!</p>
<p>PM it to me</p>
<p>Pm it to me. I would love to read it.</p>
<p>i dont really know which way to go..but i tried..does anyone want to critique mines?</p>
<p>got one person to read it…anymore takers?</p>
<p>I’d be happy to help! just pm me!</p>
<p>PM it to me</p>
<p>Pm it to me. I would love to read it.</p>