Read my essay por favor

<p>if you could read my essay please email me your email…critiques are greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>I'll be glad to critique your essay. :)</p>

<p>pm me bro, ill read for you</p>

<p>pm me too
i'd like to read/critique your essay</p>

<p>PM me and I'll read it as well.</p>

<p>^^ same goes for me - PM me ^_^</p>

<p>wow you guys are supportive :)</p>

<p>haha, thats one reason i love the Penn board! i don't think any of the other Ivy League boards are as supportive as this one (i might be wrong though - i didnt do a thorough check of all the other boards lol)</p>

<p>PM me too, if necessary. I still owe sammo an essay though....:(</p>

<p>It'd be my pleasure to read it..</p>

<p>E-mail it to me at <a href="mailto:dw51688@hotmail.com">dw51688@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p>or PM me..</p>

<p>Good luck with your app!! and umm.. yea you should've known we were all nice here.. hello.. its the penn prospective student board.. you should take it for granted that were sweet as cherry pie / caramel / vodka..</p>

<p>pm me and ill read it too, not like you havent had enough responses tho :)</p>

<p>PM me too. I'd love to help you out! I would put my e-mail up, but I got "in trouble" on this site before for doing that. So yeah, just PM me... I hope my critique can be of some help! Good luck!</p>

<p>dw51688 - sweet as vodka...?? lol</p>

<p>dam.. you caught me</p>

<p>Hi, my name is Dennis, and I'm an alcoholic.</p>

<p>.. uh oh.. does penn have AA meetings? if i lose my support group.. ill drink like a madman.. hmm.. not that that'll be a problem or anything..</p>

<p>hahaha</p>

<p>the penn forum does seem as supportive as any AA group lol</p>

<p>dw, get into penn. you'll have the best support group in the Ivy League (and the biggest ;))</p>

<p>so you guys..</p>

<p>.. supporting me by saying that i dont need alcohol </p>

<p>or supporting me as in..</p>

<p>'dw.. chug chug chug chug..'</p>

<p>while you 2 hold the funnel above my head</p>

<p>I, for one, am the type to say "Denny, u dont need this, mate" WHILE holding the funnel above your head</p>

<p>i'm the type to either be laughing my head off, or fretting over that much alcohol</p>

<p>how quickly does "help me on my essay" turn into help me with my drinking problem... now thats unique to university of penn... thanks for all the feedback</p>