Read my essay?

Applying to College
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<p>Hi, everyone!</p>

<p>I finally finished my common app essay; unfortunately, I'm not completely satisfied with it yet. English is not my first language, and writing is not my strong point. So, I was wondering if anyone is willing to read it and give me some suggestions. It currently contains about 1,200 words, which needs to be cut down to around 500 (due to the new word-limit). Just a few words per person can amount to a great number, so pleaseplease help!</p>

<p>Thanks so much :)</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>Im here :wink: PM me</p>

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<p>Thank you both!! :smiley: I’ve sent you the Private Messages containing my essay.</p>

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<p>I will read it. PM me</p>

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<p>I am willing to help. PM me the essay and perhaps your areas of concern.</p>

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<p>Sure I’ll help you out. PM it to me :)</p>

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<p>Thank you all! :)</p>

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<p>Anyone else?</p>

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<p>I would love to read it.</p>

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<p>Thanks :)</p>

<p>Anyone else??</p>