Read my essay?

<p>Hey I have an essay that I'm considering sending in for commonapp. Would anyone like to read it? I'm wondering if it's good enough for schools like CalTech or MIT or Stanford. These are my reach schools And I want my essay to sort of stand out to them. Reply and I'll pm it to ya!</p>

<p>I will be happy to give feedback. You might not be able to PM in which case there is an option to email. New members need certain number of posts</p>

<p>Bump; Thanks for the constructive criticism, murphy. Anyone willing to give a second opinion to allow for optimal essay editing power!?</p>