<p>Hey! I have my common app essay and was wondering if anyone would be willing to read it?</p>
<p>PLEASE: be as brutal as possible! (my feelings will not get hurt) :)
Let me know what I should change, anything, even if it start the whole thing over again. </p>
<p>thanks!! Ill PM those who want to, the essay!</p>
<p>I will be more than happy to help you, I also saw you are interested in Wharton; my friend just graduated if you have questions. PM me your essay.</p>