<p>I have written essay, which is much more of a memoir. I feel it still needs a lot of work, so if anyone is willing, I'd would like the feedback.</p>
<p>PM me only if you are interested and are exprienced enough to give proper feedback.</p>
<p>Thanks in advance</p>
<p>pm it over</p>
<p>anyone else?</p>
<p>i'll read it over. pm me</p>
<p>hey hey its not about reading it! Its about giving back proper feedback. If you are so interested in reading essays, I suggest, buy some books like as<br>
50 Successful Harvard Application Essays.</p>
<p>Anyone seriously interested in helping me?</p>
<p>I'll give you feedback! =D</p>
<p>i'll do it.</p>
<p>just pm me</p>
<p>I would be happy to read it. My mother is an english teacher, with your indulgance, i could show it to her. Also, would you mind reading mind, just finished it tonight.</p>
<p>thanks people!</p>
<p>anyone else? i need more criticism</p>
<p>just pm me</p>
<p>pm it over</p>
<p>bump...bump...</p>
<p>anyone else? I can do better with more criticism</p>
<p>Ill read it, pm me</p>
<p>buuummmmmp....</p>
<p>I'll read it. Pm me.</p>
<p>pm me! I'll read</p>
<p>Hey, Ill read it. PM Me...</p>
<p>buuummp....</p>
<p>PMed all of you</p>