read my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi everyone,
I know there are probably millions of posts like this, but I would really appreciate it if someone would read my first attempt at a common app essay. It's not very formal, just something I came up with after sitting down for a bit and coming up with a story to tell. I basically want to know if this type of essay makes sense, or if I should go for something more structured. Thanks a lot!</p>

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<p>I'll read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>pm ne =)</p>

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<p>sure, pm me</p>

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<p>i'll read it...pm mee</p>

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<p>Send it to me. I'm in an essay-reading/critiquing mood.</p>

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<p>PM me :)
love to read and critique</p>

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<p>Sure I'll be happy to...PM me</p>

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<p>I'll give it a read; PM me as well.</p>

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<p>I'll read it</p>

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<p>I'll read it, too. PM me.</p>

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<p>ill read it. pm me</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>