Read My ESSAY?

College Essays
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<p>I am not the best writer and I could use some advice or criticism on my essay. I chose the "experience that has impacted your life" prompt from the commo application</p>

<p>oh yea i will be applying to gwu, fordham, northeastern, american, u of md, and temple</p>

<p>just ask and ill pm it to you</p>

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<p>Sure. I’ll help edit.</p>

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<p>thanksssssssss</p>

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<p>I can help to I have a Soph in college</p>

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<p>pm me too.</p>

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<p>PM me.
10 char</p>

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<p>Did you see my sample essay (and suggestions) on exactly this topic?</p>

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<p>digmedia
yes i did. i actually read your sample essay right before i wrote mine and it really helped alot.
Your sample essay was more than jus a sample by the way…it was really good</p>

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<p>sureee PM it to me</p>

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<p>veryyyy nice…just check up on the grammar a bit and ur set but very nice. A little event and you turned it into a lesson of your life…good luck with this.</p>

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<p>PM me…
btw, im not applying to ANY of your schools, so no worries :)</p>

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<p>Want me to read it? PM me the essay.</p>

<p>I went through the application process last year.</p>

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<p>I would read if you still need feedback…going to be a freshman this fall.</p>

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<p>you can PM me</p>