<p>I've gotten very mixed reviews on this essay; my dad told me to rewrite it but my </p>
<p>I will. PM?</p>
<p>I've gotten the same responses on mine, too >_< Hope you don't mind I'm 09 XD</p>
<p>I will take a look...PM</p>
<p>i am happy to read it. pm me</p>