Read my essay?

<p>Hi, I have two essays I would like to get feedback on. I thought it would be best to post this in the parents thread. Anyone? I'll PM you my essays if you reply with an affirmative.
Thanks!</p>

<p>Sorry, forgot to add that I'll also tell you about the specifics of the schools I'm applying too also. Its a special case, so it may guide you in your feedback. Please help!</p>

<p>Send them to me by PM.</p>