Read my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Is anyone up for reading/constructively criticizing my personal essay for the common app? It is a first draft but i would like to hear back about whether my idea is good/if it tells enough about me. It is about my twin brother and how he has inspired me</p>

<p>Write back and i will pm it to you!</p>

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<p>I don’t mind seeing it. Could you see mine- second draft?</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look tonight if you want! email it to me as an attachment-- <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>hey i dont mind reading your essay pm me</p>