Read my essay?

<p>I was wondering if any current UChicago students would be willing to take a look at my essay. I am looking for someone to look at the idea of the essay rather then the syntax or grammar. </p>

<p>I am looking to apply early action, and it seems like the due date is just getting closer and closer and I am getting a bit nervous. I liked my essay for the first few drafts I made, but the more I read it, the more I hate it...I dont know, I just want some extra advice. </p>

<p>Please, only UChicago students! Preferably students past their first-year :)</p>

<p>bump</p>

<p>10char</p>