Read my essays and be brutal. PLEASE?

College Essays
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<p>I have a common application essay about the most influential person in my life. I would love if someone would critique it. </p>

<p>Thanks! =]</p>

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<p>I can read someone else’s essay in response</p>

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<p>Sure, PM it over. :)</p>

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<p>Wait… I think I may have read yours already…</p>

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<p>I’ve changed it around, but I get the feeling its choppy now. It fairly different from what you have read.</p>

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<p>anyone else care to take a look?</p>

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<p>Ahh, then send it over if you wish. :)</p>

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<p>If you PM me your essay, I’ll PM you mine :).</p>

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<p>Sure, send it over :D</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!(:</p>

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<p>send it over! i’d love to read it</p>

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<p>Pm me. I like a good read</p>

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<p>PM me. I’ll try not to be reserved lol</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you want</p>

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<p>I’m a good critic; pm me:)</p>

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<p>hey, pm me. i’m good at giving harsh and honest advice</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>