Read my first college essay please?

College Essays
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<p>Hello all,
I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read my college essay. It's my first essay, but please be really critical.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>I’m a 2010er, but I’ll read it and be as critical as possible. And no, I am not interested in stealing it. </p>

<p>PM me if you desire an honest critique.</p>

3

<p>I’ll read it if you want and provide feedback</p>

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<p>im a 2010er but i already finished my common app essay so i have no intention of stealing urs </p>

<p>PM if you want to ill be happy to read/edit it</p>

5

<p>If you need another opinion, I wouldn’t mind reading it</p>

6

<p>i’ll gladly take a look at it; pm it over with the prompt.</p>

7

<p>hey you can PM it or email it to me and i’ll read it over for you :)</p>

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<p>same here.
what unis?</p>

<p>btw, i’m 2014, but i proomise i am happy with mine so i wont steal</p>

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<p>i’ll read it…i have mine done too but i’m interested in how other people have approached them!</p>