Read my Latest Common App Essay?

<p>I decided to re-write my common app essay and I'd really like someone to read it. I'll read any essay you have in exchange.</p>

<p>I could also use some help with my common app EC essay.</p>

<p>Want to swap?</p>

<p>Sure! I’ll send you a PM.</p>

<p>bump… (10 char)</p>

<p>Sure. Let’s swap. I need criticism on my personal statement.</p>

<p>ill do it!</p>

<p>Wanna swap with me too? I need definite criticism on my mine!</p>

<p>Sure! Just PM’d you the essay. Anyone else interested in reading it?</p>

<p>Same here, send it over and I’ll read it and give some feedback!</p>

<p>Pm me ill offer some advice :)</p>

<p>If you’re still interested, we could swap. pm me.</p>

<p>yeaaah. let’s swap i need a feedback for my essay also. Pm me plz</p>

<p>I can read it. Feel free to PM me.</p>

<p>I don’t mind reading anyone’s essay. My daughter is an English major and the editor-in-chief for her school newspaper. Anyway, to make the long story short, she refused to let me read her essay until she sent in it. And guess what? I found two very very simple errors in grammar. When I pointed those out, she was so upset. She thought her chance to getting into UM was gone (particularly when she wants to major in English). Anyway, she lucked out. She got accepted to Michigan EA with scholarship. Let me know if you want an adult (and not your parents or teachers) give you an honest feedback…</p>

<p>oh, BTW, I am a parent. yes, a 50 year old man. So, would someone be so kind to tell me what is a PM?</p>

<p>Hey, would you like to swap?</p>