read my letter to admissions director

<p>To Whom It May Concern:</p>

<p>As you consider my application for admission to {XYZ UNIVERSITY}, please allow me to explain a less than exemplary part of my transcript. At the end of my junior year, I caught a good friend of mine cheating and changing her grades (unbeknownst to our teacher) in the Algebra 2 class that we both had together. After discussing what I saw with her and trying to figure out the situation before jumping to conclusions, I decided to tell my guidance counselor all that I had discovered. After an investigation led by my school’s administration, it was determined that my friend had in fact cheated and switched her grades in the class. Obviously, the situation put a strain on our friendship, and I blamed myself for putting one of my best friends at risk of expulsion. However, I knew that my conscience could not bear knowing what she did and not telling someone so that proper action could be taken. Therefore, my grades began to slip from A’s to C’s because of the stress that I was under at that hard time. I honestly believe that had I not been in that situation last year, I could have kept up with my rigorous schedule. Thank you for your time and your understanding.</p>

<p>Sincerely,
{ME}</p>

<p>I say don't send it. You may be completely telling the truth but it definitely sounds like you're making excuses. It won't go over well with the admissions officer.</p>

<p>That's what my heart says, to not send it. But I really want to go to this school and I don't want my stupid GPA to mess it all up. I just want to explain myself and I don't know how else...</p>

<p>Trust me, I think mentioning this lowers your chances. Just put the extra effort in to writing a brilliant essay and let your good qualities shine.</p>

<p>Have you considered asking your GC to address this issue in his/her letter to the school?</p>

<p>ADad's idea is the best one.</p>

<p>ADad's idea would also be taken more seriously by the school</p>

<p>I say don't send it. ADad's suggestion is good, though, as some people have already said.</p>

<p>Go with ADad ... and please do not use words like "unbeknownst" in your essay, you will look as a thesaurus promoter. Harvard says: "Keep it simple, stupid!"</p>