Read my main common app essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>I wrote an essay for the 'place where you are most content' essay and I would love any feedback and constructive criticism! I don't want to post it here, so if anyone would like to help me, I'll PM it to you!</p>

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<p>I’d be glad to take a look.</p>

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<p>Ill be happy to help u out.</p>

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<p>I’d love to take a look</p>

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<p>I ll take a look at it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to look it over</p>

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<p>Helped my sister with hers a bit and would be glad to help you with yours!</p>

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<p>I would be glad to take a look as well.</p>

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<p>Send it to me at adamashraf97 @ hotmail . com (The spaces are only to avoid CC censoring it)</p>

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<p>Sure. I’ll read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>PM me too :)</p>

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<p>I’d like to read it! PM me :)</p>

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<p>I can read, if you’d like :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! :slight_smile: PM Me</p>

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<p>I can help! PM me! :D</p>

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<p>I’ll read it dude. …</p>

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<p>I’ll look at it! I’m great at narratives.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, send me a PM and I’ll get back to you with feedback in a few days</p>

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<p>Pm me .………</p>