Read my Penn communities essay?

<p>I tried something, but I don't know if it worked. Anyone willing to read it over and provide feedback?</p>

<p>I submitted mine, send it over and I’ll critique.</p>

<p>Yeah, I’ll Help out too…</p>

<p>I’ll read it too</p>

<p>I’m done with mine, you can PM it over :)</p>

<p>send it to me just finished mine i have time</p>

<p>I actually just sent mine in a few days ago, so I’ll also read it. You can PM it or e-mail it to me (<a href="mailto:aakash.abbi@gmail.com">aakash.abbi@gmail.com</a>)</p>

<p>try me, pm it over.</p>

<p>pm it please</p>

<p>could I PM my communities essay to some of you?</p>

<p>hotdancer and scooter, i’d be willing to read your guys’ essays and provide feedback. i just submitted mine a couple days ago.</p>

<p>Id be happy to help you out :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it. pm me</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read it, PM me.</p>

<p>i would love to help… got in ED like two weeks back</p>

<p>Yah I sure can.</p>