Read My Personal Statement?

College Essays
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<p>Hi,</p>

<p>I just finished my first essay (I know, I should have started earlier!) and was hoping a couple people might be able to critique it for me? If any of you can, I would really appreciate it. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I bet you'll find more than a couple of takers.
I'll read it! =D</p>

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<p>i'll read it. PM me</p>

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<p>haha, wow... That was fast. I'll clean out my PM box and send it to you guys. Thanks!</p>

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<p>I will read it please.</p>

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<p>pm over...</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it, PM me</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll read it. I might be able to give you some tips.
If nothing else it could serve as inspiration for me (writing my own personal statement as we speak).</p>

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<p>if its not late
i'll help</p>

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<p>I can read your essay. Just PM me.</p>

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<p>PM me dude and I will give you excellent feedback.</p>

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<p>I'll read it. pm me.</p>

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<p>I'll read it, too</p>

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<p>I'll read it</p>