read my revised essay??

Applying to College
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<p>anyone wanna read it before i finally send it off?? i would appreciate it</p>

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<p>i</a> can help</p>

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<p>anyone else wanna read it??</p>

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<p>sure, pm me</p>

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<p>yeah i ll give u feedback</p>

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<p>me too :)
could u pm me?</p>

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<p>I'll read it if you PM it to me.</p>