read my risky common app main essay

<p>This will probably be my main common app essay. I have a safer, more generic version I was thinking of using from my SCEA stanford essays, but I decided to take a different spin on things, and voila, my new essay.
It's a bit risky, a bit odd, and I'm afraid it could come off the wrong way. But it could be good if done right, I think.
Comments on the tone and overall consistency will be very much appreciated- though I'd appreciate the standard revision as well. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>i'll take a look</p>

<p>send away buddy</p>

<p>I don't want to see it. Because this isn't the Stanford board, and things are dark, cold, and lonley here.</p>

<p>pm it please</p>

<p>if you could PM it, that would be great</p>

<p>My essays are risky too. I'd love to read yours.</p>

<p>sure PM me</p>

<p>PM me too if you want - some of my essays are risky as well.</p>

<p>i'd love to read it./</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>I'd love to read :D</p>

<p>I'll read it.</p>

<p>I'll read and comment</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>PM me. i'm excited. risk makes me happy.</p>

<p>pm me!
I'm only the 29th person to ask, but if you need anyone else!</p>

<p>PM me. I would be happy to take a look. I thought about trying this risky essay for BU, but I am not completely sold on the idea. I would really enjoy reading yours.</p>

<p>i'll look over it</p>

<p>risky essays are fun..pm me! i'll give you suggestions.</p>