Read my Stanford essays please?

<p>I finished the long essay and the activity and roommate shorts. Anyone care to read them and tell me what they think? I'll PM them to you. I especially need help on the roommate one. </p>

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<p>sure i'll try to proofread</p>

<p>hmph you don't accept private messages, silly wharton.
and that maintenance thing was way longer than 15 minutes.</p>

<p>oops turned it off</p>

<p>i'd like to take a look. :)</p>

<p>i'll help proofread =)=)</p>

<p>I'll read it</p>

<p>sure y not ill read</p>

<p>I'll take a look at your roommate essay. I'm still editing my roommate one, so it'll be interesting to compare mine and yours.</p>