Hello! I wrote a statement of interest for UCSD (music performance & composition) but I don’t know if it’s good…
anyone willing to critique on it? 
Sure, PM it to me
I think Lia011 may need a few more posts before s/he can PM… or is it the other way 'round?
So Lia there may be no way for anyone on this forum to privately view your essay. Do you have a teacher or someone else who can help you?
Thank you everyone! But the deadline was sunday so I’ve already submitted them. I think the essays were ok :3 thank you!