Read my Supplemental Essay about my Goat?

<p>Hey! This is due tonight (yay procrastination!) and I was wondering if anyone pretty please wanted to just do a quick grammar check/make sure it addresses the prompt decently. I'd prefer people who have submitted their apps (or are not applying), though.</p>

<p>Thanks!!</p>

<p>PM me, sounds interesting (:
(I submitted my apps, btw)</p>