Hey guys!! Since CU RD apps are due soon I’d like a second opinion on my why Columbia essay. I’d prefer class of 2019 or kids who got in - ED sorry if that’s paranoid haha.
I’d be glad to take a look at it so long as you’re looking for someone to do something a little higher-concept than proofreading 
If it’s not too late , Am Happy to read it , have an MBA with over 15 yrs corporate experience